Bonsoir, pourrez vous me corriger s'il vous plait.. The Giver is a film about a distant future , the emotions were clear , the colors banned and suppressed memo
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Bonsoir, pourrez vous me corriger s'il vous plait..
The Giver is a film about a distant future , the emotions were clear , the colors banned and suppressed memories to create an ideal world, man has created its strict rules in order not to repeat the mistakes of the past as the war . Only someone << the giver >> the difficult task of keeping the emotions of the pass to be able to help people at a decision regarding spending . A young man like no other is the ferryman in turn , he learns the past, he learns the emotion, the tasty color. He wants to change this life without all the beautiful things that upset her life.
The Giver is a film about a distant future , the emotions were clear , the colors banned and suppressed memories to create an ideal world, man has created its strict rules in order not to repeat the mistakes of the past as the war . Only someone << the giver >> the difficult task of keeping the emotions of the pass to be able to help people at a decision regarding spending . A young man like no other is the ferryman in turn , he learns the past, he learns the emotion, the tasty color. He wants to change this life without all the beautiful things that upset her life.
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1. Réponse marie0110
il n'y a pas de faute et j'ai relue 2 fois -
2. Réponse myriamt
c'est bon sauf le "in order not to" je crois que ca se dit pas mais plutot for not repeat (...)